Now, that’s better!
They start to wonder what happened next, if he was hurt.
They may even wonder why he’s wearing red, billowing pants!
The point is, the visitor has to see the story. He can’t fill in the blanks the way you can.
We have to do it for him.
Otherwise, he walks away, learning — nothing.
Let’s keep him from walking away!
Let’s compel him to stop and wonder, the way you did when you started.
Show him why your subject is so cool, so he too, can feel your passion.
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